No, this is cheesy, melodramatic self-wanking. Great writing would be clear, would communicate to the reader, and make sense (and, as pointed out above, not sound like a cheap romance paperback.)
Now the subject matter? Yeah, pretty impressive. Too bad the delivery was all I could notice as I tried to read it.
"great writing"?
No, this is cheesy, melodramatic self-wanking. Great writing would be clear, would communicate to the reader, and make sense (and, as pointed out above, not sound like a cheap romance paperback.)
Now the subject matter? Yeah, pretty impressive. Too bad the delivery was all I could notice as I tried to read it.